Wow, this is real nice. I love the organ and the lead guitar. Can't really understand the lyrics but I'm sure it's probably just about the most profound shit anyone's ever heard. I like the way you've stretched it out too. Some of your tunes end right about the time they're getting interesting. Well one or two. Oh, kind of a sudden ending. Hard to know how to wrap these things up sometimes. Long lost track from Hunky Dory? acetboy 2008-06-25 02:24:19 2008-06-25 02:24:19 5 Very relaxing...and gee, some of those lyrics sound awfully familiar :) Nice job! not bad... LadyDie 2008-06-25 03:53:04 2008-06-25 03:53:04 5 I like those Blue Blockers myself. Sepia World Sumanguru Gyra Jones 2008-06-25 13:45:02 2008-06-25 13:45:02 4 Very quasi-Bowie ! More "The Man Who Sold The World" than "Hunky Dory" in my opinion though. I think the 'reggae' bit would have worked better had the drums leant onto the third beat as one would expect to happen in that genre. You should sing more often ! Call me Ms. Picky, but the oh so slightly out of tune acoustic guitar (somewhere around the 'G' or 'B' string I think) became a little bit wearing after a while. Not bad Morticia 2008-07-05 08:45:25 2008-07-05 08:45:25 4 I'm saying break north my friend and get yourself some merle, but that dont make no sense tall...merles from the south. sounds like... dedmon 2008-07-11 21:34:51 2008-07-11 21:34:51 5 5 4.60